**Uniform Essay**

          America has agreed to let us have freedom and be different. According to Louis D. Brandeis, “America has believed that in differentiation, not uniformity, lays the path of progress. It acted on this belief, it has advanced human happiness, and it has prospered.” Most of the schools want school uniforms they don’t let people be different. The Board of Education is wanting all school to have uniforms it all of the school had uniforms there would be no difference at all. Parents will spend more money on doing laundry. No one will be different. You have to buy school uniforms and outside clothes.

          All of the parents are going to have to spend more money on washing the uniforms everyday. Most people would buy 3 sets of uniforms so you will have to wash them a lot. Parents will have to spend more money on laundry detergent. Some people will say to buy more uniforms. They are wrong because that will cost even more money.                                                                                                                                        If every school had uniforms there would be no difference. If everybody is the same there wouldn’t any standing out. Nobody would be able to compress their uniqueness. Most people would say there would be no more bullying. They are wrong because nobody would be different so no one can say anything good either.
          When people get school uniforms you are going to have to buy outside of school clothes, too. You’re going to have to buy three or more sets of school uniforms. The amount of money you already are spending on regular clothes will be doubled. People are probably going to say that isn’t a lot of money. They are wrong because it already costs a lot of money, for school clothes and if you add the cost of the uniforms it’s a lot.
          Uniforms will do no difference if all schools K-12. If schools get uniforms you are going to have to buy uniforms an regular clothes. Uniforms mean no difference. Parents will have to increasingly public schools are requiring uniforms which doesn’t spend more money washing clothes.

Persuasive Essay

          Out of the whole entire world about 21% of people make mistakes with pens. If you are one of them, then the Eraser Buddy is a great product for you. Eraser Buddy can erase any pen of water colored markers. It also comes in many different sizes, shapes, and scents. Eraser Buddy can erase pencil without leaving a single smudge! In my opinion, this is the best eraser out there! This eraser can erase only pen and water colored marker unlike ordinary erasers. All you do is erase and then it is gone! There is completely no mess. Eraser Buddy is great for coloring mistakes also. All the kids will love it!
          Eraser Buddy comes in many different sizes, shapes, and scents. There are over 15 scents to pick from! Also, tons of sizes and shapes to pick from too. Kids can do their homework while having fun smelling the Eraser Buddy. It is the best eraser yet!
          Eraser Buddy is so great it can erase pencil marks without leaving a single smudge. There will be no more messy looking papers! When you erase, there is no eraser tracks left behind so you don’t have to keep flowing them off. Once you erase a pencil mark, you’ll see the difference! Everybody’s papers will look perfect now!
          Erasers like this cost a fortune, but not the Eraser Buddy! We want all of the kids to try it. There is a coupon that saves you 50% off! All of the kids will h\love it! Eraser Buddy will be great for everyone.
          This eraser will be the best selling eraser out there! This eraser has so many sizes, scents, and shapes to pick from. Eraser Buddy can erase any kind of pen or water colored markers. All of those pencil smudges and eraser tracks will be gone with Eraser Buddy. This will not only benefit your company, but the people of New Jersey too!

Reflection Thinking Points

I liked my piece because I enjoyed filming and making my commercial.  I also liked my piece because I thought we did a good job advertising our product which was monopoly express.  My last reason of why I liked my piece was because I thought it was sort of funny watching the commercial. I feel I am good at keeping eye contact with the camrea. Another thing I feel I am good at is remebering the script I was supposed to say. Also I feel I am good at speaking loud in my commercial. Some areas I could improve on are showing the product to the camrea, looking less nervous, and changing my tone according to what I have to say.  Persuasive essay writing techniques and strategies I'd like to try next time are adding a celebrity appeal, a coupon, and the bandwagon technique.  The part of the writing process I enjoy the most is revising my final piece because Ilike making sure my paper is perfect or close to prefect.  When I finish revising my paper I feel proud to hand it in.  Another reason why revising my final piece is my favorite part of the writing process is because I want to make sure I have no mistakes on my paper and get a good grade.  My goals for the next time I write are mostly about writing more in my writings. I want to add more detail to make my writing better.  Also, I want to try on improvng my introduction and my conclusion. Three things I learned about myself throughout this project are that if I try my hardest I can suceed. Another one is that i can do better than I imagined. There was one mentor author that informed my writing and that was Rahlp Fletcher. These are my reflections to my piece.

**Letter to a tv station**

I think you should play my commercial after 3:00 because that is when most of the kids in school leave school. It would better than playing it during kids in school when no one is watching tv except mabye for adults which won't want any of the kid's toys. I think a lot of kids would like my commercial. Playing it after 3:00 is important because if you don't mostly no kids will be watching your commercial on tv.