Reflection Thinking Points

I liked my piece because I enjoyed filming and making my commercial.  I also liked my piece because I thought we did a good job advertising our product which was monopoly express.  My last reason of why I liked my piece was because I thought it was sort of funny watching the commercial. I feel I am good at keeping eye contact with the camrea. Another thing I feel I am good at is remebering the script I was supposed to say. Also I feel I am good at speaking loud in my commercial. Some areas I could improve on are showing the product to the camrea, looking less nervous, and changing my tone according to what I have to say.  Persuasive essay writing techniques and strategies I'd like to try next time are adding a celebrity appeal, a coupon, and the bandwagon technique.  The part of the writing process I enjoy the most is revising my final piece because Ilike making sure my paper is perfect or close to prefect.  When I finish revising my paper I feel proud to hand it in.  Another reason why revising my final piece is my favorite part of the writing process is because I want to make sure I have no mistakes on my paper and get a good grade.  My goals for the next time I write are mostly about writing more in my writings. I want to add more detail to make my writing better.  Also, I want to try on improvng my introduction and my conclusion. Three things I learned about myself throughout this project are that if I try my hardest I can suceed. Another one is that i can do better than I imagined. There was one mentor author that informed my writing and that was Rahlp Fletcher. These are my reflections to my piece.